My One Paragraph Essay #2
Hey guys, this is a school related post, so don’t get confused that I’m posting a random recording. So basically, in my English class we had to write a one paragraph essay to depict the Gothic elements mentioned. My first draft had some errors and my friend recorded reading my first draft. If you go to the page of the link, you’ll be able to see the comments he made and listen to the recording. By recording and listening to your friend reading your essay is very effective when you are revising to look for sentence fluency.
here is the link –> http://skpatterson-english10.wikispaces.com/Jorma%27s+OPE2
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